Comments on: Book Cover Art Chapter 4: More Mocking

By: Kisa Whipkey

Kisa Whipkey — Thu, 17 Oct 2013 18:26:40 +0000

Thanks, Alexandra!

That’s what I thought about 2.2 as well–that it was a tad more in line with “fantasy” covers. This series is Urban Fantasy, so I felt it was important to capture that feel. Plus, the few beta readers I have were insistent that the bench needed to be featured more prominently. I did really love the elegant simplicity of design 1 though. But the final version we created is more perfect for this story, and, I feel, combined the best elements of both designs. 🙂

By: Kisa Whipkey

Kisa Whipkey — Thu, 17 Oct 2013 18:24:14 +0000

In reply to Laila Blake.

Thanks, Laila!

I definitely feel extremely lucky. Ashley’s work is amazing, so I jumped on the chance to be her guinea pig. Wait until you see the final result–it’s perfection! 😉

By: Alexandra

Alexandra — Thu, 17 Oct 2013 08:53:47 +0000

How easy is to make a simple cover into an amazing one! The chain of the pendant gave a curve on the background, filling the cover! While the bench was like screaming “I am a magic one!!!!” Beautiful ideas and i can’t wait to see more!! 🙂

By: Laila Blake

Laila Blake — Thu, 17 Oct 2013 08:16:36 +0000

They are both stunning and I love the way you show your process here! I’m especially fond of 2.2 – it’s so simple and stark and draws you right in. I like 1.2 as well but I don’t see the bench in the background and the difference in sharpness/blur between fore-and background feels just a hint too strong. But both would be amazing covers – lucky author :D.

By: Kisa Whipkey

Kisa Whipkey — Wed, 16 Oct 2013 19:59:20 +0000

In reply to melody Winter.

Thanks, Melody!

I did the same thing with my opinion. At first, I was sure I was going to go with the first choice. But after seeing the second, and hearing some feedback from the lucky few who’ve read the story, I really started to feel strongly about the new direction in Mock 2.2. I think you’ll be impressed with the final outcome. It’s beautiful, elegant, and perfectly matches the book. 😉

By: Kisa Whipkey

Kisa Whipkey — Wed, 16 Oct 2013 19:57:16 +0000

In reply to Summer.

Thanks Summer!

I’m really enjoying seeing everyone’s feedback. Honestly, this story has been stuck on the back-burner for so long because I was really afraid it wouldn’t be well-received. But seeing the excitement surrounding the book cover is giving me hope. Especially hearing people’s interpretations of the cover.

I think you’ll really like the final one we came up with! 🙂

By: melody Winter

melody Winter — Wed, 16 Oct 2013 19:49:56 +0000

Ohhh, after the comments I made last time I am now backtracking. I like the bench in the second mock up – it hints at loneliness and the cloudy grey hints at mystery. I still like the placement of the necklace in the first design. I’d find it hard to decide between the two now, although the second one with the complete bench is really starting to stand out.
Looking forward to hear what Kisa thinks.
Melody xxx

By: Summer

Summer — Wed, 16 Oct 2013 15:36:37 +0000

Neat to see how changes are incorporated. I have MY favorite 🙂 I really like Mock 2.2, though I would go for an even simpler look, sans filigree, or even a lower percentage of opacity on it or different color. That being said, I like the addition of the chain and bolder title in Mock 1.2. Can’t wait to see the final cover!